I don't know why I haven't commented on this. Probably cause I would have said this. Remember that time we all got attacked by those butterflys? They were just everywhere all of a sudden. And, reguardless of what most people say, they were BITING us.
Just thought you'd like the trip down memory lane.
But, this is a really good graphical poem, where it is so easy to feel and see what you are describing. Great imagery and telling. Simple, short, and very nicely put together.
I love this poem because it is an incredibly beautiful image, more so because it is beautifully expressed. It's so soft and gentle - I feel like I have been touched by those butterflies as well!
Voici une très belle poème, qui m'a touchée! Je l'aime - et je pourrais le lire beaucoup de fois!
(not really sure why I decided to write that in French, just felt appropriate for some reason!)
Anyway, once again, a great poem Luke!